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Tuesday, 3 September 2013

Swimming- tastic

It was time to swim my fastest and race other people. I waited nervously on the side of the pool for my turn.
"Ella" the instructor called out. It was my turn to shine. The whistle blew and off I went on my back, kicking really fast to the end of the pool. Before I knew it I touched the wall and came 4th.
I waited, till I was called again. This time was freestyle swim." Get ready swimmers and go" said Archie " go". I swam and swam and swam till I reached the end and touched the wall. As I swam to get out of the pool, they handed me a card that was color bronze. That meant that I came third. I walked over to the number three platform and toke a photo.
After was Butterfly half way and Freestyle the other half.I stepped on the wall and pushed off when the whistle blew. I was winning until we swopped to over and did freestyle. I touched the wall, but the two others touched it before me. They gave me another bronze card. I stood up on the 3 stall again.
I was getting ready for my last race, Breath stroke. I Stood there and pushed off. "Go, go, go, go" they cheered. I stopped. I had came 4.
I dried myself and got dressed. I felt exhausted after that swim. It was finally time to rest.

Lettuce in the Letterbox

WALT retell a story.
Greshka, Vine, Celeste, Veyonce, Isaac and me were making a video on Lettuce in the letterbox.
I know I have retold the story when I can make a oral broadcast.

Monday, 2 September 2013

Fletcher's Family Food Factory


WALT Persuade people to build/ not build a factory on our courts. 

Dear Fletcher's Family 

I truly believe that building a factory on our school is incredible. Would you want to design your own playground? It would be awesome to have a factory. 

I extremely believe that having a factory with CCTV is Spectacular. CCTV can protect me, CCTV can protect you, CCTV can protect everyone. CCTV can protect us because it guards our school as a security. Do you want to be protected? Everyone will be safe with CCTV. 

I believe that designing a playground is exciting. How would you want to design your playground? Designing a playground is interesting  designing  a playground is fantastic, designing a playground is spectacular. Because if we build a factory we can design our own playground and the limit will cost less. 

I believe that a competition is an awesome idea. Competitions are an awesome idea because we can compete other people. Everyone likes competition. Do you? Competitions are crazy competing other children. Building a factory is incredible because we can have a   competition on drawing a playground. 

Building a factory is important and will make children really happy. Building a factory is good, building a factory is exciting, building a factory is marvelous. Do you like factory's? Fletcher's family food factory is fantastic. We have CCTV to be safe. All the children will be excited about the playground. The competition will be awesome.    

Monday, 26 August 2013

Bulling is Bad

WALT explain how we were bullied and how we felt.
In room 5 we were talking about bulling. We wrote how we felt when we were bullied.
I know I have learnt this when I explain how we felt when we were bullied.

Tuesday, 20 August 2013

AFOREST

WALT use AFOREST in a persuasive text.
In room 5 we have been talking about starting school early or not. There were two groups. In each group we had to discuss about why we should start school or not.
I know I have learnt this when I know what AFOREST is and use it in my persuasive text.

A- Alliteration, Destinys diary got dirty in the dirt.
F- Facts and Figures, The light from the sun reaches earth in 8 minutes.
O- Opinion, I truly believe starting school earlier is fantastic.
R- Rhetorical question, Are you listening?
E- Emotive language, Spiders are gross and creepy and will crawl up in your ears.
S- Superlaterive, Starting school early is the best.
T- Threes, My mum is awesome, my mum is fun, my mum is helpful.

Monday, 19 August 2013

M-E-N-U






Room 5 is learning all about healthy food ideas. We created a brainstorm with Breakfast snacks dinner and lunch. Underneath had a whole list of healthy meals that you could make, But before, we researched recipes for that meal. There is  smoothies,
 corn cakes raspberry yogurt loaf ham and egg mini pies and a lot more. This is my brainstorm.


Thursday, 15 August 2013

My Super Healthy Pyramid

WALT know what foods are healthy for your body.
We are learning this because God made us and we have to respect his creation by eating healthy and doing exercise






I know this because I take care of my body and eat healthy.