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Sunday 14 July 2013

The Extraordinary Adventures of Travelling Ted

In the classroom ,one at a time, each child takes Ted home for the holidays.
While Ted was sitting on the desk he accidently fell into Phoenix's bag. Along came Phoenix, grabbed his bag and left for home. Once Phoenix got home and opened his bag he found Ted.
Phoenix liked to do everything with Ted, sleeping, reading stories and even skiing. Nana said to take a first aid kit incase.
 They were having fun skiing, until they both crashed. Ted knew what to do, he should find the whistle. So ted found the whistle and called for help. Some people came to rescue Phoenix and left Ted behind. Suddenly a furry creature came over and took Ted to his cave. Phoenix started to miss Ted. But then one day there came a knock. And Ted was at the door.
The next day it was school day. Phoenix bought a lot of pictures of him and Ted along with him.
But Ted knew about another adventure he could go on.

2 comments:

  1. Mrs Richardson14 July 2013 at 18:30

    Cool story Ella. Is this a book you have been reading or a movie you have seen. I would love to know what the other adventure Ted goes on are.

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  2. Hi Ella. I love reading your holiday writing. I agree with your teacher, keep it going and tell us more.

    Mrs Burt

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